She is everywhere I walk, and I see her
But her heart is far away where I can’t reach.
I wonder around everywhere we went
and think about the memories we had, too painful.
I’m too timid to tell my true feeling.
When wind blows near me,
I tell wind to send a message “I will be waiting”.
Wind blows back with no reply.
It is all over, have been over, no more chances
She already went step forward
But I’m lingering, waiting for her to come
really i have nothing to comment since free verse is just free verse, but probably you should add some of the poetic elements like alliteration or some metaphor.
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